ACC 2 : CHILDREN UNDER 17 SHOULD OR SHOULD NOT HAVE FACEBOOK ACCOUNT?
Little Angel
There are many
social networks right now, one of them is Facebook. There are more than 50
million users and most of them are children under 17. There are pro and con
about children under 17 should or should not have Facebook account. Many parent
claim that Facebook is not a good social network for their children, especially
children under 17. But some others said it’s okay if their children have Facebook
account but still under their supervision.

However, some others
said that they give their permission to their children especially under 17 to have Facebook
account but still under their supervision. Something bad will never happen as
long as they keep watching their children while using Facebook.
In conclusion, I think
children under 17 are allowed to have Facebook account but still under their
parent’s supervision. The parents should not give their ‘over’ protect to their
children. Just give them some independence but not too much.
5 komentar:
It's a good topic ..
I agree with you Isti, parents must still pay attention and give them freedom... :D
I agree, children under 17 y.o should under parents supervision.. But how about we? We are still under 17 y.o.. hahaha:D
I really liked your conclusions.
it is very good :)
hohohoho :D
i agree with aisyah, i like part conclusions, but all good, easy to understand :D
it is good writing little, clear and simple one, but i can get more information here, the reader can read your article easily, hmm maybe some picture will help you to share your opinion, thank you